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Monday, 26 September 2011

Demon Curse - Chapter 1 - Second Draft


Chapter 1 - Godhart
“You have been summoned sire,” the initiate kneeled before the old templar. Godhart closed his book, the afternoon sun filtering through the stained glass windows of his spartan lodgings.
“Have you seen her initiate?” he asked.
The initiate lowered his head.
“Yes sire.”
Godhart stood up from his bed, and walked to the window that looked down into the courtyard. Down below, sworn acolytes were practising, their wooden swords clacking against each other.
“Well, what does she look like?”
“Sire?”
“Describe her to me.” He watched a boy in the yard get knocked over, holding his arms up he yielded to his opponent. Godhart remembered his own training, but back then it was much harder. He was an old man now, well past 40... well past adventures and battles.
“Well sire, she is like no woman I have ever seen. Her skin is dark like the foreign sailors at the docks, and she bears scars all across her body, she even has a scar across her eye – and her eyes, the colour of ice.”
The boy spoke excitedly, like he was relating something rare and fantastical.
“That's not even the half of it sire, her hair – red as fire, and she wears it like a man, short cropped.”
Godhart didn't doubt it was her. No respectable woman would look like that.
“Are you smitten boy?”
The initiates cheeks flushed, he bowed down apologetically.
“Where is she?”
“She is waiting in the patriarchs foyer, sire. Pater sent me to summon you as soon as she arrived.”
Godhart turned around. The boy kneeling before him was small and scraggly. Godhart knew that he would never become a templar with a body like that.
“What was your name again?”
“Paul sire.”
“Have you seen this book Paul?” Godhart motioned to the leather bound book he was holding. Paul shook his head.
“No sire.”
Godhart ran his finger lovingly down the books spine.
“This is no ordinary book,” he read the gold embossed title. “Litanies of Alleman.”
He opened the book and held it in front of Paul.
“Can you read, boy?”
Paul bowed again.
“I am still learning my letters sire.”
Godhart sighed. He was a boy like that once, young and unable to read. If it wasn't for his fighting abilities he would never have been accepted into the templar's brotherhood.
“You don't need need to read to appreciate this book. Here,” he showed him the lettering. “What do you notice about these letters?”
Paul took the book gently, like it was a priceless artefact.
“Sire, these letters aren't written by hand.”
Godhart beamed. There was some hope for this initiate yet.
“Very good boy. This book was printed on a machine, a printing press they call it. With this invention a thousand books can be printed in a day. In a hundred years every man, woman, and child in Deutzreich will own their own books.”
Paul nodded vigorously, but Godhart knew he had no concept of numbers over a dozen.
“Here, take it. Look after it for me.” he said.
The young boys eyes became wide with shock.
“B-b-but I can't – this book must be worth a fortune sire.”
Godhart smiled, the boy was right, it was a first edition and cost him five silvers, which was about his monthly stipend.
“Do you know the Litany of Charity?”
“I do sire.”
“Recite it for me.”
Godhart closed his eyes, listening to the monotone recitation.
“Alleman bless those who give freely and ask nothing in return. Alleman bless those who renounce wealth and are pure in spirit. Alleman bless those...”
The litanies of Alleman were music to his ears, there was nothing more beautiful in the world. Paul recited all six verses perfectly. When he finished Godhart opened his eyes again.
“Well done. Let's not keep the pater waiting any longer.”
Paul stood up hastily, clutching the book in his arms. Godhart let him lead the way. The sandstone halls of the temple of Alleman were alive with templars and their subordinates. Everywhere Godhart looked there were templars and acolytes attending to their tasks, templars teaching fighting arts and strategy or acolytes sitting quietly in the study halls and reading. Their order had come along way since he was an initiate. As they passed the martial practise courtyard, he caught sight of brother Luka, resplendent in a templar's full battle dress. His steel plate armour was polished and on the breastplate was an oak tree, the symbol of Alleman. Godhart listened to the lecture Luka was giving to the acolytes, as he walked by.
“When you take your vows and become a brother, this,” Luka pointed to his armour. “Is what you will wear to battle.” he pulled his sword out of his scabbard, the steel chafing against the hard boiled leather sheath. The acolytes around him took a step back.
“Don't be mistaken. A templar is more than armour.” With a quick thrust and slash he demonstrated his skill with the sword.
“A templar of Alleman is a holy warrior...”
Godhart wanted to stay and listen, but letting the elderly pater wait would be disrespectful. He hurried along after Paul, his simple sandles scratching across the flagstone hallway leading to the pater's offices. The pater's study stood at the heart of the temple compound. The main corridor leading to his study was lined with the statues of the patriarchs that had led the order. Godhart looked in awe as they passed each stern face, bearded, scarred and wise. At the very end of the hallway, presiding over the long line of patriarchs, was the founding father, revered pater Konrad. Paul stopped ten paces before the statue, letting Godhart ahead to pay his respects. Godhart got on his knees, bowing so low his forehead touched the ground. In quiet contemplation he paid his respects.
“Please madame, you cannot go any further.”
Godhart's silent prayers were interrupted by a young man's voice.
“Madame, please.”
The cool marble floor hid Godhart's scowl. Coming up behind him were the loud footsteps of an initiate who had not taken off his walking boots. The hall of pater's was a sacred place and he didn't take kindly to initiates or guests that disregarded the rules. Lifting his head from the ground he looked back to see an acolyte desperately trying to stop a woman. She walked with a cool determination and was heading straight for the pater's study. Godhart noted that she was tall for a woman and muscular, like no respectable woman should be. She wore knee high leather boots, white tunic, tarnished gold breastplate, gauntlets, pouldrens, greaves, and around her shoulders hung a green travel cloak. What Paul neglected to mention were her oddly long ears, ears that did not look human. He had to admit, she looked every bit like the alien warriors spoken of by the traders who came from the deep south.
“Madame, I must insist, you cannot carry weapons here.”
Hanging loosely from her hand was an ornate spear. The woman ignored the acolyte, like he didn't exist. She was almost at the dais of the founding pater. Godhart stood up and turned on her as she walked towards him. The acolyte behind him shrunk back when he saw Godhart's face. With her way barred she stopped in front of the old templar.
“Acolyte.” He said.
The acolyte behind the woman dropped to his knees, pressing his forehead to the ground.
“Why do you defile the hall of paters?”
The acolyte trembled in fear.
“Sire, please forgive me, she just rushed in, I couldn't stop her.”
Godhart's gaze shifted to the woman, her eyes met his. In those icy blue eyes he forgot himself for a moment.
“Sire?” The acolyte spoke to him.
“What!”
“Your punishment sire?”
He felt like he had lost a moment in time. Godhart cleared his throat.
“Well, um... write out the litany of piety 100 times. I will deal with the guest.”
“Yes sire.”
The acolyte bowed again, before standing up and hurrying off. Godhart dropped his head low, showing respect to the woman.
“I'm very sorry madame, but you will not be able to see patriarch Daniel while carrying a weapon.”
He looked up to see her reaction. Her expression did not change, while her eyes bored into his very being. For a moment he thought she hadn't understood him, but like a summer breeze she nonchalantly walked around him.
“Madame.”
She didn't listen. Godhart started forward.
“Madame.” He shouted, grabbing her by the arm. The woman froze.
“Madame, please, we have rules in the temple.”
She turned around slowly, the eyes that had once been cool and calm now blazed in fiery anger. For a moment an irrational fear enveloped him, but it was broken by a shout behind him. Pulling away from the woman he turned to see pater Daniel shuffling hurriedly towards them. The elderly pater was hunched over and his long white beard reached down to his knees. His white robe dragged across the ground, the hems dirtied by dust. Godhart immediately kneeled down, next to him Paul prostrated himself, touching his forehead to the ground.
“Venerated Lynian Pallatai.” Pater Daniel said with a smile on his face. He bowed as low as he could and raised his hand to his forehead as a sign of respect.
“How long has it been old man?” The woman said. Godhart was surprised, she spoke in a silvery tone, which was in direct contrast with her appearance.
“Have you been teasing my templar's again?” He said with a throaty laugh. She laughed as well, looking the old pater over.
“You need a walking stick Daniel.”
“The day I get a walking stick is the day I die, madame.”
He motioned to a set of heavy oak doors to the left of the hall.
“Shall we?”
Lynian walked ahead, pushing past the oak doors. Pater Daniel shuffled in front of Godhart and Paul.
“Paul”
“Yes pater.” The boy answered in a squeaky voice.
“Please go to the treasury and tell brother Niklas it is time.”
Paul stood up quickly, hurrying off to complete his task. Pater Daniel placed his hand on Godhart's shoulder.
“Come my boy. We have an important matter to discuss.”
Godhart bowed. Supporting the pater they entered the study together behind the woman.  

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